Saturday, September 10, 2005

My friend is taking a poetry class and she told me about this assignment...you take 5 minutes, use exactly 2o words and no two words canbegin with the same letter. It really makes you think.....here's what happened....

First try - hopeless

Fortunes made around suspicions
Light through mist bounces off glass
No hope for darkness here
Poor intentions don’t changed easily

Second try - not much better but i like it ---it reminds me of my old people

Skin hanging loose with time and years
Clocks winding down from overuse
Death, placing a hand around fortune, rides us

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